http://underwater-owl.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] underwater-owl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] latino_menace 2005-12-11 03:09 am (UTC)

That simply won't do, because Random's stroking himself harder, dragging closer to the edge but not going to cross it just yet because he wants to see Ramon first.

"Look... at me... christ, baby... and come."

It's still a command. Because it's been long enough and Ramon has to let go and Random wants to watch him and feel him while he does. Because that's the best part.

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